Recent Comments

nycboot
1/3/20, 4:36 PM
Hey again Swizz, According what I've read, Todd has enslaved: Chester, Amelia, Mitch, Joe, Shawn, Mike, Bethany, Jessica, and Mike. That's 9 people over which he keeps tabs. Isn't the neural switchboard inside his head approaching overload?
Mdlftr
1/3/20, 4:31 PM
Intriguing start! I can't wait to see where this goes!
K
1/3/20, 3:55 PM
To be honest I never ever wish the good side win so bad like this and I love master and slave story... but this time please god save Joe at least !! I really enjoy the story thanks! : )
1/3/20, 3:25 PM
In my mind, Priapus of Milet is illustrating this series.
Anonymous
1/3/20, 2:35 PM
i for one hope you finish the story exactly how its supposed to. great writing i love your dark take. team Todd fuck those weak minded people ;)
Anonymous
1/3/20, 1:23 PM
I'm glad Carter has standards, and not messing with relationships
Martin
1/3/20, 12:50 PM
Hi Swizzington, > Actually, I almost never read other people’s stories on this site. I find it hard to enjoy reading on here because of how it’s displayed on my screen. I think it’s the font or something, I’m not sure. If I want to read fiction in this genre, I will go to Mcstories. It’s a lot easier on the eyes. Are you aware that you can change color and font using the "Theme" menu on the top right of the menu bar? 😊 I'm pretty sure that there's a theme which is comfortable for your eyes. If not, then let me know how you'd like me to improve it. Anyway, I really, **really** love this story of yours. Even though it's hard to stomach that asshole and I feel so bad for all the guys which have their mind and personality destroyed. Just as the other commenters, I really hope that they get their revenge after all. Nathan ftw!
Anonymous
1/3/20, 12:39 PM
I hope next part turns out great as well
1/3/20, 9:02 AM
I hope you continue this ^ ^
Anonymous
1/3/20, 9:01 AM
thank you and good luck