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Anonymous
1/3/20, 5:23 AM
SAVE JOE MY BB, TOO PURE FOR THIS WORLD!! I really hope Todd gets what he deserves and gets punished in some way!
M
1/3/20, 5:10 AM
i see so many people rooting for Nathan but he bores me! sure it'd be sweet if he could defeat his cousin but other than being sweet and related so possibly possessing the same abilities (unless the serum is for Todd's brother only?) he just doesn't catch my interest. He seems like the photo that comes up to illustrate the old saying of nice guys finish last. i hope he pulls out some extra drive and or assertiveness to defeat Todd, or maybe other cousin Dylan will be the surprise hero? A character we haven't met yet, perhaps? it's fun to speculate. also, if we could see the breaking method of Chester i would be thrilled!
1/3/20, 4:36 AM
I've been a huge fan of your work since the How to be a good boy and Yes Sir ( which is one of my all time favorite stories) Im loving how this story is shaping up and how different each time Todd takes over a new person mind. I cant wait to see what Todd does to Joe.
Anonymous
1/3/20, 4:25 AM
can't help but wish they struggled a bit harder and didn't have their memories change so quickly.
Anonymous
1/3/20, 4:23 AM
Man, I really want Nathan to win and save Joe/Joe fall for Nathan. Fingers crossed.
1/3/20, 3:57 AM
Driving home from work, I couldn't wait to get to this chapter. It did not disappoint. The chess scene was unexpected and brilliant. I like Joe, and I love men being turned into obedient subjects, but it was tough to take. Only because Todd is the antithesis of what a masculine man should be obeying. Again, brilliant (and poor Joe) I'm looking forward to see how it all plays out with these men and possibly the hallway thugs.
nycboot
1/3/20, 3:47 AM
Another thing Swizz....I may have had a strong, even violent reaction to Todd, but for most of these stories (especially the really good ones), I use them not just for thrills or j/o, but to examine and understand (as far as possible) my own thinking and fetishes - of what turns me on, and why. I really hate Todd as a character - I hope he gets the ultimate lobotomy and then crushed by a falling grand piano or run over by a motorcyclist - but I'm also fascinated by your various descriptions of what happens when he enters various people's minds. We the audience keep on telling the victim "fight back you stupid idiot!" and of course they never do or can. So for some of us, these stories are a great way to explore or own minds. I'm only sorry that future readers can't experience the suspense of waiting for the next chapter. :)
Anonymous
1/3/20, 3:18 AM
and the ending would be...?
1/3/20, 3:14 AM
Dude, excellent as always. Wanna collaborate?
Anonymous
1/3/20, 2:56 AM
Stephen is no more, now is just Miles... Wonderful chapter and you the writing in this final submission is simply marvelous