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12/2/24, 6:35 AM
really enjoying the series!
11/29/24, 5:17 PM
Hello MC Master! Thanks for the story! I am a big hypnosis fan myself, and would love to discover ways to achieve a much deeper trance state than I seem to have managed to date. I have no formal training in either psychology or hypnosis, but for me sound waves do seem to contribute to achieving a trance state, which makes the story more real. Regarding your writing in Chinese and using Google translate, for me it worked fine. However, I did notice a couple of issues. One may have been caused by the name, Lynn. In almost all cases I've run into Lynn is more often a female name. You did specifically mention that Lynn is a man, but afterwards used the pronouns 'she' and 'her', indicating Lynn is a woman. The second case is the way the word 'hibernated' was used. The word hibernation means "to be in an inactive or dormant state or period". It is not used to refer to 'coming out of hibernation' (which is a normal way of putting it). Thanks again for sharing your imagination and story-telling skill. I am certainly looking forward to reading more.

11/29/24, 11:41 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Hello, boi98229. Thank you very much for your feedback. I will then make changes to the text to continuously improve the reading experience. In fact, when I read the stories on this site with Google, I found some of the nouns to be the hardest to translate, but most of them I could imagine what it meant by it. Even though I imitated the tone and grammar of English writing when I wrote, mistakes were inevitable due to the imperfections of Google Translate and my lack of English cultural background. However, I will continue to revise it based on your feedback.

12/2/24, 6:14 AM
@[MC Master](/user/show/10003908) i am happy to be of service, Sir, and very much looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Zander
11/29/24, 10:02 PM
Are the elder brother and father really dead? Or have they fallen under the control of Aloysius and become degenerate whores?

12/2/24, 6:05 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) dad's definitely dead. older brother disappeared with Aloysius as the sole witness but I mean, he's... probably dead right? what are the chances
12/2/24, 5:08 AM
O man, this was incredible! Absolutely loved it!!!
12/2/24, 4:08 AM
This was unbelievably well told.
12/2/24, 4:05 AM
Wonder if Alvin will inadvertently join the game? Be a mage or something idk
12/1/24, 11:52 PM
I hope the boyfriend becomes a hypermasculine top or daddy!
12/1/24, 8:38 PM
These two chapters are a great start. It seems that Mr. Raymond and the Yates brothers all now have a ‘toy’. We know Harry and George, but we didn’t get the first guy’s name. So what’s the motive? World domination or do they each just want a sex bot? Or will the boys be used by the Horizon company for other schemes? Can’t wait to see.
12/1/24, 6:53 PM
I am so glad to see an isekai gay erotic story here! And you have started it so well.