Recent Comments

LongtimeFan
1/2/20, 10:06 PM
Ooh, interesting. I like how you're seeding weaknesses to Todd (Mike's ability to overwhelm him, however briefly, in the mindscape; the removal of the glasses releasing the programming, etc.). Of course, the SD card is troublesome, but we'll see what happens...plus Nathan is definitely suspicious. Sometimes paranoia pays off. And ha ha, I'm glad I was correct in my diagnosis of Todd as a narcissist! :p Oh, and in response to your last question re: mothers and mind control. I think it's a stronger version of my dislike of the "daddy" kink. See, when I read an erotic story to "enjoy myself", the *last* thing I want to think about is my family. Seeing a mother or father referenced is like a jolt back to reality, because all of the sudden I'm thinking "What if this was my mom/dad?" Masturbation is, after all, *self*-stimulation; thinking about others and their emotions is kind of anathema to the process. Does that make sense? Plus there's the more sociological aspects of female domination that is, I think, more troublesome than male (after all, the horror novel was "The Stepford Wives," not "Husbands"). :p Again, having my brain kick in and start analyzing/thinking is a total mood killer... All of that is to say: your stories are definitely thought-provoking and exciting! And I don't read them for pleasuring: I read them because you're a damn good writer. Thank you!
1/2/20, 10:04 PM
Keep going!
1/2/20, 10:03 PM
Please continue!
1/2/20, 9:56 PM
Great episode! Cops are a hot idea although making the chief into a huge gay muscle bear daddy would be amazing. Maybe the entire police force turns gay/bi?
1/2/20, 9:41 PM
Nicely done. You write really well!
Anonymous
1/2/20, 9:04 PM
Really hot, i'm courious how this will continue? But i'm hoping that it goes on
LeadPb
1/2/20, 8:30 PM
@nycboot, isn't Amelia Chester's mother? So far Todd's mother hasn't made an appearance yet. And no hurry, Swizzington. Your works are great, but take your time with it. Rushing is rarely good. :*
firesix
1/2/20, 8:16 PM
Loved it. Almost nothing is better than a manly man turning into a dumb slut. I really hope you keep writing, I get so happy and excited every time I notice you've posted :-)
Anonymous
1/2/20, 8:10 PM
Yes, everyone will not like every decision but the writing is fantastic. Some of the best on this site. Thank you for sharing your work and looking forward to the next chapters!
Swizzington
1/2/20, 8:09 PM
That's an interesting comment, LongtimeFan. What is it about mothers in particular that bothers you? I know some people don't like having women mentioned AT ALL. I acknowledge that opinion, but to me, that doesn't seem realistic. For these longer, multi-chaptered stories, there are sometimes going to be women around, and sometimes the villain needs to bring them under control for pragmatic reasons. I try to write to my audience, and keep that type of thing to a minimum. But like I say, sometimes it's necessary :-)