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Anonymous
1/3/20, 12:40 AM
Super hot start to the New year. hope to see it continued!
nycboot
1/3/20, 12:10 AM
To the anonymous poster who wrote "...and everyone goes back to normal": Of course, after such a trauma not everything can be normal again. I secretly hope that Joe returns as much as he can and realizes that he loved the experience with Mitch and decides he wants Nathan. :) Maybe that would be too sentimental for the twistedness of this story, but it would be cool. :) If Todd is going to do his butterfingers thing again, I'm guessing it would be a labyrinth. :) Also Swizz, this story reminds me so much of Edlam's [Re-Educator](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newSeries/show/8224). Was it an inspiration at all?
Anonymous
1/2/20, 11:57 PM
Man, fuck Todd. Hope he ends up losing
Swizzington
1/2/20, 11:36 PM
Yeah, that makes a lot of sense, LongtimeFan. I'm also generally not a fan of the 'daddy' thing in general, so I totally understand where you're coming from there!
Anonymous
1/2/20, 11:05 PM
I'm enjoying the story but I am really done with Todd. The fucker needs to get taken down a notch. I hope he looses in the end and everyone goes back to normal.
LongtimeFan
1/2/20, 10:06 PM
Ooh, interesting. I like how you're seeding weaknesses to Todd (Mike's ability to overwhelm him, however briefly, in the mindscape; the removal of the glasses releasing the programming, etc.). Of course, the SD card is troublesome, but we'll see what happens...plus Nathan is definitely suspicious. Sometimes paranoia pays off. And ha ha, I'm glad I was correct in my diagnosis of Todd as a narcissist! :p Oh, and in response to your last question re: mothers and mind control. I think it's a stronger version of my dislike of the "daddy" kink. See, when I read an erotic story to "enjoy myself", the *last* thing I want to think about is my family. Seeing a mother or father referenced is like a jolt back to reality, because all of the sudden I'm thinking "What if this was my mom/dad?" Masturbation is, after all, *self*-stimulation; thinking about others and their emotions is kind of anathema to the process. Does that make sense? Plus there's the more sociological aspects of female domination that is, I think, more troublesome than male (after all, the horror novel was "The Stepford Wives," not "Husbands"). :p Again, having my brain kick in and start analyzing/thinking is a total mood killer... All of that is to say: your stories are definitely thought-provoking and exciting! And I don't read them for pleasuring: I read them because you're a damn good writer. Thank you!
1/2/20, 10:04 PM
Keep going!
1/2/20, 10:03 PM
Please continue!
1/2/20, 9:56 PM
Great episode! Cops are a hot idea although making the chief into a huge gay muscle bear daddy would be amazing. Maybe the entire police force turns gay/bi?
1/2/20, 9:41 PM
Nicely done. You write really well!