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Anonymous
1/3/20, 4:25 AM
can't help but wish they struggled a bit harder and didn't have their memories change so quickly.
Anonymous
1/3/20, 4:23 AM
Man, I really want Nathan to win and save Joe/Joe fall for Nathan. Fingers crossed.
1/3/20, 3:57 AM
Driving home from work, I couldn't wait to get to this chapter. It did not disappoint. The chess scene was unexpected and brilliant. I like Joe, and I love men being turned into obedient subjects, but it was tough to take. Only because Todd is the antithesis of what a masculine man should be obeying. Again, brilliant (and poor Joe) I'm looking forward to see how it all plays out with these men and possibly the hallway thugs.
nycboot
1/3/20, 3:47 AM
Another thing Swizz....I may have had a strong, even violent reaction to Todd, but for most of these stories (especially the really good ones), I use them not just for thrills or j/o, but to examine and understand (as far as possible) my own thinking and fetishes - of what turns me on, and why. I really hate Todd as a character - I hope he gets the ultimate lobotomy and then crushed by a falling grand piano or run over by a motorcyclist - but I'm also fascinated by your various descriptions of what happens when he enters various people's minds. We the audience keep on telling the victim "fight back you stupid idiot!" and of course they never do or can. So for some of us, these stories are a great way to explore or own minds. I'm only sorry that future readers can't experience the suspense of waiting for the next chapter. :)
Anonymous
1/3/20, 3:18 AM
and the ending would be...?
1/3/20, 3:14 AM
Dude, excellent as always. Wanna collaborate?
Anonymous
1/3/20, 2:56 AM
Stephen is no more, now is just Miles... Wonderful chapter and you the writing in this final submission is simply marvelous
1/3/20, 2:50 AM
Maybe that would be too sentimental for the [twistedness ](gclub.mn.co)of this story,
SadReader
1/3/20, 1:58 AM
As always, excellent writing. I am alright with the 'daddy' thing. Although somehow, I sincerely wish Todd will become the puppet as he really is not a good master. Nevertheless, save Joe as always.
Anonymous
1/3/20, 1:41 AM
The suspense of the story is killing me lol. I love the visual imagery of how people lose their minds and how they try to fight back. You're a great writer and I'll be excited to see how it ends, regardless of what happens.