Recent Comments

Jon
1/2/20, 5:05 PM
Man this is getting so good I can't wait for the next one and who it will affect.
UchihaDEMS
1/2/20, 4:48 PM
does that means Nathaniel can turn the tables on him?
guardjangel
1/2/20, 4:47 PM
I love this story so much, keep it up! I really enjoy the different take on the characters and even though I'm usually more interested in the victim's perspective, this story pleasingly surprised me as I enjoy Todd's behavior a lot and what he has in store—he is a really amusing character. I'm really looking forward to the next installment and how Nathan will be involved with Todd.
Swizzington
1/2/20, 3:40 PM
Yeah, I did expect that this story would not be to everyone's taste. Which is why I mentioned at the beginning of chapter 1 I had been anxious to share it :-) But I figure, if even one person enjoys it, then it was probably worth uploading.
Anonymous
1/2/20, 3:29 PM
amazing!!!! More please!!!!!
1/2/20, 3:14 PM
I found it absorbing and very well written. Intriguing set-up. Keep it going!
K
1/2/20, 2:59 PM
I really feel bad for Joeyyy He is a saint He is my baby!! I wish he becomes normal soon!! But the story is hot though 😏
Anonymous
1/2/20, 12:40 PM
can I suggest some cops?
Anonymous
1/2/20, 12:29 PM
I agree, I think Nathan should win
1/2/20, 12:16 PM
I like Swizzington's writing, and I'm still finding this series compelling, but I have to say that Todd is such a hateful sociopath that a little of Todd goes a long way. In this chapter, we were getting a lot of the action and backstory from Todd's perspective, and it just made me more angry than aroused. This might just be my personal taste, but I think the story would work better if we got more of the action filtered through the victims' perspectives and less through Todd's perspective.