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Anonymous
1/2/20, 6:39 PM
p.s. I'm the same guy
Anonymous
1/2/20, 6:28 PM
If I may suggest something: 2 cops are passing by, the good cop gets some more muscular mass and a better wife (she was cheating on him with his partner but Colin put a stop to it) and then punishes the partner by turning him into the Police department's bitch, with the police chief (a gay man) as his daddy, so, what do you think?
nycboot
1/2/20, 6:02 PM
Hi Swizz, your characterization of Todd reminds me of Anthony in "It's a Good Life" (the famous Twilight Zone episode with Bill Mumy as the boy who could will anything). But it's so over-the-top I'm almost numb to any more depravity and horror. I suppose your initial characterization of Joe was intended to be a little disapproving - he's too goody-goody, but it's sure painful remembering what he went through and watching him as a lobotomized human (although you've made it clear that Todd's current power is temporarily). I don't feel that way with Shawn. Hopefully Chester's device will be administered to Todd on setting #3. Also did you make a mistake? Nathan and his mother remembered her sister's name as Barbara, but in Todd's house she's Amelia.
Anonymous
1/2/20, 5:41 PM
Love a series of good dumb twink tfs! Mikey and Matty were the highlights--definitely the best developed of the bunch.
Lusty Stallion
1/2/20, 5:39 PM
you certainly can. i'll see if a nice cop transformation can be worked into chapter 3 which ive only recently started.maybe a couple of days till the next one
Enslaved
1/2/20, 5:32 PM
New Year, New Chapter Coming?
Jon
1/2/20, 5:05 PM
Man this is getting so good I can't wait for the next one and who it will affect.
UchihaDEMS
1/2/20, 4:48 PM
does that means Nathaniel can turn the tables on him?
guardjangel
1/2/20, 4:47 PM
I love this story so much, keep it up! I really enjoy the different take on the characters and even though I'm usually more interested in the victim's perspective, this story pleasingly surprised me as I enjoy Todd's behavior a lot and what he has in store—he is a really amusing character. I'm really looking forward to the next installment and how Nathan will be involved with Todd.
Swizzington
1/2/20, 3:40 PM
Yeah, I did expect that this story would not be to everyone's taste. Which is why I mentioned at the beginning of chapter 1 I had been anxious to share it :-) But I figure, if even one person enjoys it, then it was probably worth uploading.