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nycboot
1/2/20, 6:02 PM
Hi Swizz, your characterization of Todd reminds me of Anthony in "It's a Good Life" (the famous Twilight Zone episode with Bill Mumy as the boy who could will anything). But it's so over-the-top I'm almost numb to any more depravity and horror. I suppose your initial characterization of Joe was intended to be a little disapproving - he's too goody-goody, but it's sure painful remembering what he went through and watching him as a lobotomized human (although you've made it clear that Todd's current power is temporarily). I don't feel that way with Shawn. Hopefully Chester's device will be administered to Todd on setting #3. Also did you make a mistake? Nathan and his mother remembered her sister's name as Barbara, but in Todd's house she's Amelia.
Anonymous
1/2/20, 5:41 PM
Love a series of good dumb twink tfs! Mikey and Matty were the highlights--definitely the best developed of the bunch.
Lusty Stallion
1/2/20, 5:39 PM
you certainly can. i'll see if a nice cop transformation can be worked into chapter 3 which ive only recently started.maybe a couple of days till the next one
Enslaved
1/2/20, 5:32 PM
New Year, New Chapter Coming?
Jon
1/2/20, 5:05 PM
Man this is getting so good I can't wait for the next one and who it will affect.
UchihaDEMS
1/2/20, 4:48 PM
does that means Nathaniel can turn the tables on him?
guardjangel
1/2/20, 4:47 PM
I love this story so much, keep it up! I really enjoy the different take on the characters and even though I'm usually more interested in the victim's perspective, this story pleasingly surprised me as I enjoy Todd's behavior a lot and what he has in store—he is a really amusing character. I'm really looking forward to the next installment and how Nathan will be involved with Todd.
Swizzington
1/2/20, 3:40 PM
Yeah, I did expect that this story would not be to everyone's taste. Which is why I mentioned at the beginning of chapter 1 I had been anxious to share it :-) But I figure, if even one person enjoys it, then it was probably worth uploading.
Anonymous
1/2/20, 3:29 PM
amazing!!!! More please!!!!!
1/2/20, 3:14 PM
I found it absorbing and very well written. Intriguing set-up. Keep it going!