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Anonymous
1/1/20, 7:15 AM
Three separate stories minus one of the three promised stories equals two separate stories.
abrobdl@gmail.com
1/1/20, 5:15 AM
I would love for Nathan to become the master and Todd in the end the Dumb Horny Puppet he's made out of his classmates.
Hypnosoda
1/1/20, 4:35 AM
I fucking LOVE this. An ideal thing to do would be to have Nathan become one of Todd's puppets - Todd really fighting against it too but they all submit to Todd in the end. Nathan calling him Master too. Up to you of course, I love this so far, can't wait for Todd to have more puppets. Do you think you could upload images of what the puppet glasses and hair and things look like? No worries if not. :)
Anonymous
1/1/20, 3:19 AM
It was so amazing!! It is getting darker and hotter!!
xl19586@essex.ac.uk
1/1/20, 1:21 AM
where is the part 10? The story is amazing. I can't wait to see the next part.
nycboot
1/1/20, 1:01 AM
Hi Swizz, yeah, I guess that was too violent. I just hope Nathan finds Todd's Achilles' Heel. I did have one idea: maybe Nathan can force Todd's fingers to Todd's temples and cause a feedback loop, short-circuiting his mind and turning him to a vegetable. :) One can hope, at least. :) And yes, your writing does impress greatly. :)
Swizzington
12/31/19, 11:58 PM
Alas, that type of violence is against the site rules, nycboot. Although, I will take your feelings about Todd as a positive sign! Deplorable is what I was going for :-)
nycboot
12/31/19, 11:44 PM
As much as was upset at chapter 2, your ideas of the chessboard and this marching band are so creative and wonderful! I hope you show Todd enslaving some more to exercise your creative gifts. Although I generally don't like heavy violence, I sincerely hope that Todd literally gets his skull smashed in the most painful manner possible.
Anonymous
12/31/19, 11:22 PM
Wild! I've never read a male pregnancy story -- I didn't know it was "a thing"! Wonder what Gramma Witch thought - or what her daughters thought about how things turned out? I'll bet family reunions are awkward, to say the least....
Anonymous
12/31/19, 11:17 PM
This entire story makes no sense at all, but it's a wild read! I wonder what the wives and witchy mother-in-law will think? Oops?