Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/31/19, 11:17 PM
This entire story makes no sense at all, but it's a wild read! I wonder what the wives and witchy mother-in-law will think? Oops?
12/31/19, 11:02 PM
> but most of the MC methods in “Various Techniques” take effect in a matter of minutes > True. This was the most frustrating part of the series. I'm loving your slow indoctrination -- dismissing the weirdness around them, etc. Very nicely done. > I don’t know if you can tell from this chapter, but the implication is that Connor and Ethan haven’t taken the pills or gotten much of the audio indoctrination; they’ve been enslaved simply by playing all 10 levels of the game Ryan shared with them. > I completely got that. I loved the video game chapter and this reference to it was excellent. It was very clear to me that they'd been inducted by the VR helmets. I'm so excited to read more!
Anonymous
12/31/19, 11:00 PM
RIP Joe but still incredibly hot. Love this series and the similar vibes to "The 'How to be a Good Boy' Handbook." Seriously, nobody writes like you. Your slower pace and inclusion of a moral protagonist makes this enjoyable for me to read.
Karl
12/31/19, 10:38 PM
need to talk to skins I'm drunk an wankin
Karl
12/31/19, 10:36 PM
great I wish I was transformed into a ugly nose broke
Karl
12/31/19, 10:31 PM
drunk an wankin I am a wealthy snobby white collar guy who wants to be
Karl
12/31/19, 10:27 PM
wankin thinking I am a white collar guy who would luv bein a stinky skin lll
Karl
12/31/19, 10:22 PM
I is wankin off on being transformed into an ugly nose broke skin
12/31/19, 10:16 PM
I like the turn of this conversion... and i hope nathan could also fight back soon... and I always think Tood will use Josey first for sex, since he give him a high sexual appetite and lower inhibitions... so I will wait for the moment :3 I hope the next one come soon XD (I can't wait)
LongtimeFan
12/31/19, 9:18 PM
Fascinating chapter! I love how you display the insidious nature of hypnosis ("easy to give in"). And it seems like this may be a family ability--Todd's remark to Nathan ("you did it too")...could it be setting up a final showdown? :O