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nycboot
1/1/20, 1:01 AM
Hi Swizz, yeah, I guess that was too violent. I just hope Nathan finds Todd's Achilles' Heel. I did have one idea: maybe Nathan can force Todd's fingers to Todd's temples and cause a feedback loop, short-circuiting his mind and turning him to a vegetable. :) One can hope, at least. :) And yes, your writing does impress greatly. :)
Swizzington
12/31/19, 11:58 PM
Alas, that type of violence is against the site rules, nycboot. Although, I will take your feelings about Todd as a positive sign! Deplorable is what I was going for :-)
nycboot
12/31/19, 11:44 PM
As much as was upset at chapter 2, your ideas of the chessboard and this marching band are so creative and wonderful! I hope you show Todd enslaving some more to exercise your creative gifts. Although I generally don't like heavy violence, I sincerely hope that Todd literally gets his skull smashed in the most painful manner possible.
Anonymous
12/31/19, 11:22 PM
Wild! I've never read a male pregnancy story -- I didn't know it was "a thing"! Wonder what Gramma Witch thought - or what her daughters thought about how things turned out? I'll bet family reunions are awkward, to say the least....
Anonymous
12/31/19, 11:17 PM
This entire story makes no sense at all, but it's a wild read! I wonder what the wives and witchy mother-in-law will think? Oops?
12/31/19, 11:02 PM
> but most of the MC methods in “Various Techniques” take effect in a matter of minutes > True. This was the most frustrating part of the series. I'm loving your slow indoctrination -- dismissing the weirdness around them, etc. Very nicely done. > I don’t know if you can tell from this chapter, but the implication is that Connor and Ethan haven’t taken the pills or gotten much of the audio indoctrination; they’ve been enslaved simply by playing all 10 levels of the game Ryan shared with them. > I completely got that. I loved the video game chapter and this reference to it was excellent. It was very clear to me that they'd been inducted by the VR helmets. I'm so excited to read more!
Anonymous
12/31/19, 11:00 PM
RIP Joe but still incredibly hot. Love this series and the similar vibes to "The 'How to be a Good Boy' Handbook." Seriously, nobody writes like you. Your slower pace and inclusion of a moral protagonist makes this enjoyable for me to read.
Karl
12/31/19, 10:38 PM
need to talk to skins I'm drunk an wankin
Karl
12/31/19, 10:36 PM
great I wish I was transformed into a ugly nose broke
Karl
12/31/19, 10:31 PM
drunk an wankin I am a wealthy snobby white collar guy who wants to be