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Anonymous
12/31/19, 6:25 PM
can you turn Nathan into a cowboy should he lose?
Anonymous
12/31/19, 6:24 PM
Really unique and hot ways of taking control. Curious to see what will be next. Maybe Nathan will get control of whatever Chester is working on, "win" in the end, and give in to some of his temptations? Never know what will happen in one of your stories. Eagerly awaiting chapter 4 once you recover from New Years.
MonsterMash62
12/31/19, 6:06 PM
Wow! That was hot. I loved how the narrator accidentally screwed himself. I love how Joseph was changed and that Trevor, the absolute bad guy, won. Very thoroughly.
Anonymous
12/31/19, 5:31 PM
I love this series but I fear this story going i five directions for Jeremy. From a super good, to okay good, to netural to broken bad and worse case scenario endings. still hot af. cant wait to see what happens
12/31/19, 5:12 PM
That's one way I tried to make it different from Topaz172's original story. He's wonderful at depicting the various stages of a victim's mental transformation, but most of the MC methods in "Various Techniques" take effect in a matter of minutes. I wanted to imagine a Master who was more patient and confident that his methods of mass indoctrination would work, using multiple methods (the pills, the music, the VR game) over a period of days to slowly enslave the frat house. I don't know if you can tell from this chapter, but the implication is that Connor and Ethan haven't taken the pills or gotten much of the audio indoctrination; they've been enslaved simply by playing all 10 levels of the game Ryan shared with them.
12/31/19, 4:56 PM
Really loving this series and Stephen's gradual indoctrination. Very hot stuff!
Anonymous
12/31/19, 12:54 PM
I'm looking forward to chapter 3.
LongtimeFan
12/31/19, 12:33 PM
INCREDIBLE. You always manage to impress! This time, by having Stephen succumb early, we get to see inside the transforming mind of a classic Hypnothrill victim--and it's brilliant. I also love how, with each new chapter, you scatter references to what's to come (the barcodes, the VR...). All of it is top-notch!
Eur19
12/31/19, 11:34 AM
Had would love to hear more about these drones and who is behind everything
Anonymous
12/31/19, 10:08 AM
I like the way this is slowly building. Seems like Nathan maybe has some power he doesn't realize yet? Your stories always have interesting twists and turns. Excited to see where this goes next.