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LongtimeFan
12/31/19, 9:18 PM
Fascinating chapter! I love how you display the insidious nature of hypnosis ("easy to give in"). And it seems like this may be a family ability--Todd's remark to Nathan ("you did it too")...could it be setting up a final showdown? :O
Anonymous
12/31/19, 8:21 PM
loved this story the characters were all very hot in how they were described and actions. will admit a little sad they didnt have a boy but just seeing them all together like that makes me happy.
Anonymous
12/31/19, 8:00 PM
Can u imagine muscle/cock growth being thrown into this chapter.. I can?
Anonymous
12/31/19, 7:56 PM
Loved this series so much! I especially enjoyed the scene where all the heroes were unstrapped from the milker machine in their costumes and robotically rose up to proclaim their obedience to mastermind. I love superhero take down stories and you did a good job with it!
Anonymous
12/31/19, 7:33 PM
This is beautiful!! I love stories like this on this site :-) Sexy and heart-warming all in one!
Anonymous
12/31/19, 6:25 PM
can you turn Nathan into a cowboy should he lose?
Anonymous
12/31/19, 6:24 PM
Really unique and hot ways of taking control. Curious to see what will be next. Maybe Nathan will get control of whatever Chester is working on, "win" in the end, and give in to some of his temptations? Never know what will happen in one of your stories. Eagerly awaiting chapter 4 once you recover from New Years.
MonsterMash62
12/31/19, 6:06 PM
Wow! That was hot. I loved how the narrator accidentally screwed himself. I love how Joseph was changed and that Trevor, the absolute bad guy, won. Very thoroughly.
Anonymous
12/31/19, 5:31 PM
I love this series but I fear this story going i five directions for Jeremy. From a super good, to okay good, to netural to broken bad and worse case scenario endings. still hot af. cant wait to see what happens
12/31/19, 5:12 PM
That's one way I tried to make it different from Topaz172's original story. He's wonderful at depicting the various stages of a victim's mental transformation, but most of the MC methods in "Various Techniques" take effect in a matter of minutes. I wanted to imagine a Master who was more patient and confident that his methods of mass indoctrination would work, using multiple methods (the pills, the music, the VR game) over a period of days to slowly enslave the frat house. I don't know if you can tell from this chapter, but the implication is that Connor and Ethan haven't taken the pills or gotten much of the audio indoctrination; they've been enslaved simply by playing all 10 levels of the game Ryan shared with them.