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Anonymous
12/31/19, 6:14 AM
Most original line EVER - “Do you know why cats have spines on their cocks, Joey?” he asked as he massaged Joey’s ass in front of his face. “It’s so they can scrape out the cum of any cat that’s tried to breed before them. Now, Brandon’s a good guy and he’d probably be a good dad in the end, but I’m not about to let his cum stay up in there when by rights it should be my cocksnot brewing in your belly. You understand me?”
Anonymous
12/31/19, 6:06 AM
DAyum! Brandon's got the sex talk down! Look out, Joey!
May 10, 2019
chad
12/31/19, 6:03 AM
What a hot story. Father-son incest is a topic that turns me on like nothing else. I especially liked the detail that the father bought the apartment for his son so they could have sex privately. Sex between fathers and sons seems quite natural to me, as both understand men's need for frequent, intense, raw sex. If you are thinking of writing a continuation of this story, I can't wait to read it.
Anonymous
12/31/19, 5:58 AM
Clever premise! I totally didn't suspect that the sons in law would be snowed in- together! without their wives!
Anonymous
12/31/19, 5:32 AM
Gotta be honest...I'm not usually into mpreg, but i absolutely loved this story! I think it has do do with the characters and the sexy way you described them. it made me really get into the relationships that built between them. Thank you!
12/31/19, 4:53 AM
Last chapter was great but this one went into a completely different direction I had imagined. Don't get me wrong, the story is well written, it's just that I get completely turned off when stories include "dumbing down", penis shrinking, etc... Hopefully the story won't center on the dumbing down part that way I can enjoy the rest of the story; Can't wait for the next chapter.
LongtimeFan
12/31/19, 4:27 AM
Another great chapter! The chess motif was great. And I like the hints of depth you add to Todd...for all his genius and power, he's clearly just a hurt little boy, still aching from when people injured him. That's sad...although--and please don't take this as an indictment on your story!--I've never really enjoyed the "villain who always wins" trope. Dear Edlam has that with Alex the bully in "Reeducator," and the Mayor in that terrifying story about sucking the life from gay men to build a town--who wrote that...but you see my point. Again, I'm sure there will be interesting twists and turns! But it's just no fun reading about a damaged, amoral person effortlessly winning all the time. "Villain Sue," that's what the TV Trope is. We shall see... :)
Anonymous
12/31/19, 2:29 AM
this was a great ending! not usually mpreg but this was exactly what the story needed.
12/31/19, 2:27 AM
i want it to be tomorrow so bad now... >.< I love the chess idea to remove and add traits into Joe/Joey 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙