Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/31/19, 5:32 AM
Gotta be honest...I'm not usually into mpreg, but i absolutely loved this story! I think it has do do with the characters and the sexy way you described them. it made me really get into the relationships that built between them. Thank you!
12/31/19, 4:53 AM
Last chapter was great but this one went into a completely different direction I had imagined. Don't get me wrong, the story is well written, it's just that I get completely turned off when stories include "dumbing down", penis shrinking, etc... Hopefully the story won't center on the dumbing down part that way I can enjoy the rest of the story; Can't wait for the next chapter.
LongtimeFan
12/31/19, 4:27 AM
Another great chapter! The chess motif was great. And I like the hints of depth you add to Todd...for all his genius and power, he's clearly just a hurt little boy, still aching from when people injured him. That's sad...although--and please don't take this as an indictment on your story!--I've never really enjoyed the "villain who always wins" trope. Dear Edlam has that with Alex the bully in "Reeducator," and the Mayor in that terrifying story about sucking the life from gay men to build a town--who wrote that...but you see my point. Again, I'm sure there will be interesting twists and turns! But it's just no fun reading about a damaged, amoral person effortlessly winning all the time. "Villain Sue," that's what the TV Trope is. We shall see... :)
Anonymous
12/31/19, 2:29 AM
this was a great ending! not usually mpreg but this was exactly what the story needed.
12/31/19, 2:27 AM
i want it to be tomorrow so bad now... >.< I love the chess idea to remove and add traits into Joe/Joey 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
nycboot
12/31/19, 1:19 AM
It's fascinating. Also I find it *extremely upsetting and depressing*. Either Nathan will wind up like Joey, or Nathan will outsmart Todd, perhaps with Chester's help. We'll see.
nycboot
12/31/19, 1:01 AM
Hehe, this was a really fun story! Lately I've not seen that many stories that revel in a pure sex scene, and this one had a funny and lovely story to put it context and make it even better. I loved the ending - it really brought it to a nice conclusion. Bravo!
12/31/19, 12:28 AM
Excellent story, I am not even into the Furry genre but it was a great story. Please write a sequel.
nerdysuitedbaby
12/31/19, 12:20 AM
I'm excited for you to continue. ;)