Recent Comments

wow
12/29/19, 8:33 PM
I think this is one of the best stories I have ever read. The idea of the demon screwing his brain was beyond brilliant.
BJHardy
12/29/19, 7:38 PM
I love anonymous criticism. It is often veiled in jealousy. It's very easy to criticize an author who has contributed for years to this blog. You should try writing a story from scratch. When you do, post it and then sit back and read the critiques of anonymous pricks dissecting your effort.
Anonymous
12/29/19, 7:30 PM
Love that you're back with another story! Very much looking forward to the rest!
LongtimeFan
12/29/19, 7:22 PM
What a wonderful story! I love the ones where the mysterious Powers That Be allowing people to warp reality are generally benevolent. Although I guess it's a riddle whether erasing someone's life is a good thing...Gabriel is clearly reluctant to do it to himself. But in any event! Great transformation, great worldbuilding, and great writing. :D
12/29/19, 6:27 PM
This is very sexy, with a great idea as well. I like the thought that a person can be tranced into becoming something. I do hope that an actual gay guy gers to keep his mind and say dominace. That would be fun.
Anonymous
12/29/19, 6:01 PM
Keep going!!!
stroppy Author
12/29/19, 5:57 PM
besides the obvious heat, I like the original (and first I've seen) conflict of the recruiter. Who wouldn't be tempted. Especially when he could make a mistake or set a timer to determine the best fit. You've opened the story to endless possibilities. Well done!
SadReader
12/29/19, 4:46 PM
Excellent writing! Really appreciate the story. I just hope that Nathan can rescue Joe in the future or else it will be too sad for me as I just lose my best friend recently.
Anonymous
12/29/19, 4:16 PM
great idea, solid writing, strong character development, (especially with Joe), and an end to chapter 1 that leaves us wanting more. Perfect. Thank you for giving your time to writing us all a great story. Looking forward to chapter 2.
Anonymous
12/29/19, 4:01 PM
When will part 2 come out this is so good