Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/29/19, 4:16 PM
great idea, solid writing, strong character development, (especially with Joe), and an end to chapter 1 that leaves us wanting more. Perfect. Thank you for giving your time to writing us all a great story. Looking forward to chapter 2.
Anonymous
12/29/19, 4:01 PM
When will part 2 come out this is so good
Anonymous
12/29/19, 3:38 PM
Can't wait to see where this goes! You are one of the best writers on here and this was a really great start.
Anonymous
12/29/19, 2:35 PM
I wish you would continue.
Anonymous
12/29/19, 2:12 PM
wonderful story enjoyed every word of it. I don't know if you were thinking about adding squeals already but I think people would enjoy it if there was more but do what you want. keep on writing.
Anonymous
12/29/19, 1:51 PM
absolutely love your work! great to see you back! new chapters cant come soon enough! lol this is the era of netflix just release them all and let us binge
LongtimeFan
12/29/19, 1:25 PM
P.S. I absolutely LOVE the passage where Stephen starts working out. The sudden lack of punctuation, the breathless pace, the pounding repetition...it's like we're actually seeing his thought process change to a gay musclehead (with a REALLY BIG DICK and a FUCKING HOT BUTT, ha ha). Incredible!
LongtimeFan
12/29/19, 1:15 PM
WHOOOOOOOOO boy...that's the good stuff. :p But seriously, amazing! I'm surprised that the narrator has "fallen" so quickly, but I'm sure it will make for an interesting story. Also, I observe that one of the Ten Commandments of Surviving a Hypnothrill Story is "Thou shalt not go away for a few days." It always ends badly. :p
LongtimeFan
12/29/19, 1:12 PM
Ha ha, another "old master" returns to the craft. Fantastic! Getting pleasant "How to be a Good Boy" vibes here. Your writing is always superb, and I know I'll be checking on the installments every day, just as I do with Hypnothrill. It's wonderful getting so excited about reading! :D
Anonymous
12/29/19, 12:23 PM
amazing!!