Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/27/19, 3:14 PM
Im so excited to see you are back. This story is starting off strong.
LongtimeFan
12/27/19, 1:36 PM
He's baaaaaaaack...Hypnothrill has returned! :D What a great finale for 2019. I can already tell this is going to be fantastic--the hypnotics are in full effect, we have 30 guys to get through, and the mental/physical transformations are already turning me on. Plus that last line--"I liked who I was. Didn't I?"--shows that the programming is already seeping into our narrator's head. Thanks for the Christmas present! :)
Anonymous
12/27/19, 10:48 AM
Always great to see a familiar face back! This looks very promising!
Martin
12/27/19, 9:45 AM
Very promising...
nycboot
12/27/19, 9:41 AM
I really like this story. It is so sweet and lovable. As far as where to go, 2 things are clear to me: 1. Nick should be made to pay retribution. Perhaps Erik can implant a keyword that makes him strip no matter where he is. Or Danny can make Erik and Nick believe that Erik planted the keyword. 2. There needs to be a little bit of tension with Danny, the narrator. So Erik should do something unexpected over which Danny has no control but has to submit. Danny loses his self-confidence (which has been present the entire series). But the result would be that Erik has asserted his Mastery and Danny really has become the slave through submission. It could be that Danny only realizes it at the end, when Erik tells him.
transformheaven
12/27/19, 9:24 AM
Unfortunately don't have the opportunity to read it soon, but amazing to see you're back :)
Anonymous
12/27/19, 8:51 AM
I love this author's stories. The First Dive story sealed the deal for me for this site and all it has to offer. 🥰
Anonymous
12/27/19, 8:35 AM
I never knew pumpkins could be so much of a turn on :D I'd love to read more of this.
Anonymous
12/27/19, 4:59 AM
I remember reading this the first time it was posted. Loved it!
Anonymous
12/27/19, 4:26 AM
this really needs to be continued. f'ing hot and great story