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12/24/19, 2:37 PM
totally HOT!! please write more like this. > “Prrrrrrph….Guh Ga Ga… Dee dee!!!”. It was so cute, watching his drool covered face thinking he was yelling adult words, not even noticing his arms and feet gripping air flapping like a baby.>
Anonymous
12/24/19, 2:34 PM
Am I a horrible person or a horny AF person if I said I want Joey to be pregnant with triplets one from each of them and them all be boys to really screw it to the mother in law for messing with them.
Anonymous
12/24/19, 11:46 AM
I'd really love him to try to convert someone but accidentally listen to the file himself
Anonymous
12/24/19, 11:42 AM
Good story!
steve10185@hotmail.com
12/24/19, 9:29 AM
Since the first time I read about the creation of Pete in Fantasy, I've been addicted to Derek Williams' storytelling. This latest piece continues that tradition and hits on my favorite theme, the creation of alpha males. Loved this!
Anonymous
12/24/19, 9:22 AM
this is very hot. at the risk of sounding pushy, will there be more in the series or will this be a concept free for others to play with like the frat rat series?
Willie Cici
12/24/19, 5:48 AM
You're one of the first authors on the old NCMC site I read. I always loved your stories and writing style. I couldn't wait to read this story, and, now, I can't wait for your follow-up. Thanks.
Anonymous
12/24/19, 5:36 AM
I don't think your younger readers are going to get all the 50s Television references, but I did and found it humorous. Good story. I enjoyed it.
Willie Cici
12/24/19, 5:35 AM
No. The idea of the Devil meandering about the world, through 'reincarnated fallen angels' intrigues me. Thanks for asking. I hope you enjoyed the story.