Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/24/19, 11:42 AM
Good story!
steve10185@hotmail.com
12/24/19, 9:29 AM
Since the first time I read about the creation of Pete in Fantasy, I've been addicted to Derek Williams' storytelling. This latest piece continues that tradition and hits on my favorite theme, the creation of alpha males. Loved this!
Anonymous
12/24/19, 9:22 AM
this is very hot. at the risk of sounding pushy, will there be more in the series or will this be a concept free for others to play with like the frat rat series?
Willie Cici
12/24/19, 5:48 AM
You're one of the first authors on the old NCMC site I read. I always loved your stories and writing style. I couldn't wait to read this story, and, now, I can't wait for your follow-up. Thanks.
Anonymous
12/24/19, 5:36 AM
I don't think your younger readers are going to get all the 50s Television references, but I did and found it humorous. Good story. I enjoyed it.
Willie Cici
12/24/19, 5:35 AM
No. The idea of the Devil meandering about the world, through 'reincarnated fallen angels' intrigues me. Thanks for asking. I hope you enjoyed the story.
12/24/19, 4:42 AM
You guys are the sweetest--I was worried this one would be a little too far out there for dudes to like. It's nice to know that others will come with me down the strange little paths my mind wanders. Hoping I can get the whole thing written before actual Christmas comes and goes, so thanks for your patience with me.
Anonymous
12/24/19, 4:11 AM
Love the transformation to cocky alpha and the setup for him to make others into himbos and more.
Anonymous
12/24/19, 4:09 AM
VERY hot! and well written.
Varlance
12/24/19, 12:48 AM
@A Voyeur Fan - Thanks. No problem, go ahead!