Recent Comments

12/23/19, 11:14 PM
Excellent work, Varlance. I've got a few ideas for paths 1.1 and 1.3, so I'd like to cover those if it's alright. I look forward to seeing your ideas for a failure chapter.
abrobdl@gmail.com
12/23/19, 8:29 PM
Hot!!!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/23/19, 8:16 PM
was that a reference to your old series, the one about the fallen angels?
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/23/19, 8:07 PM
I really hope to see the BRO file
Boston Satyr
12/23/19, 6:39 PM
I love this series too - how the brothers' in law develop their attraction, and their minds just accept the new world view, and all that follows. Love the depravity. And the descriptive writing is superb. Bravo! Keep writing!!
BodyOdor
12/23/19, 6:07 PM
This is a seriously good piece of writing. A sign of that is that the story unfolds at its own pace; not rushing to the "wham bam" stuff. It's one of the few stories to take advantage of smells, which I find to be most erotic, and an element most stories overlook. (Oversmell?)
Anonymous
12/23/19, 2:11 PM
This is amazing!!! I love how they talk! Esp treating joey the way they do. talking about knowing him up and breeding him. I can't wait for the next part! absolute love this series
Anonymous
12/23/19, 12:00 PM
best work on here in months
Anonymous
12/23/19, 6:03 AM
Incredibly hot. 5/5
Dec 22, 2019
Willie Cici
12/23/19, 4:17 AM
That was amazing!! In a weird way, I'm jealous that I didn't come up with a story like this. I can't wait to see you some more of your work.