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joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/22/19, 8:58 PM
continue please
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/22/19, 8:51 PM
he does have a point, you should try innovate a bit
Anonymous
12/22/19, 8:23 PM
Come join us... amazing how that theme reverberates through the chapters of this story. Thank you, LORD MASTER for sharing this with us. Excellent story. Great material, very well written, and super hot. Thanks to this story, I have cum for the LORD and MASTER; If you haven't yet, you should just do it. And join us....
Anonymous
12/22/19, 8:09 PM
Thank you for adding chastity to the mind control and the already overwhelming focus on pits and piss. This is a great story. I want to feel what the boys are feeling. Super hot.
Anonymous
12/22/19, 7:58 PM
Amazing start to this series. I love the combination of the SLOW and long countdown, the hypno, the sweat and the scent of pheromones. These boys are in for a real treat, I suspect, and I wish that I had joined them as the sixth person in the van. I can't wait to read more. And glad I found Lord Master and his stories. They're amazing.
Author
12/22/19, 6:25 PM
Well, perhaps 'clickbaiting' was too strong a term. Feel free to remove if desired. My intent was to enhance the surprise twist of the story, but I see your point.
Anonymous
12/22/19, 4:46 PM
"dick spit" and "ball jelly" fuck yeah
12/22/19, 1:15 PM
Great story! Terrific plot and character development. Well done!
Anonymous
12/22/19, 1:03 PM
i see. thank you for your explanation. i loon forward to reading more from you
12/22/19, 12:59 PM
Hi! This is what I would call a "Definitive Version." It extends the story and dives more into the worldbuilding.