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BodyOdor
12/23/19, 6:07 PM
This is a seriously good piece of writing. A sign of that is that the story unfolds at its own pace; not rushing to the "wham bam" stuff. It's one of the few stories to take advantage of smells, which I find to be most erotic, and an element most stories overlook. (Oversmell?)
Anonymous
12/23/19, 2:11 PM
This is amazing!!! I love how they talk! Esp treating joey the way they do. talking about knowing him up and breeding him. I can't wait for the next part! absolute love this series
Anonymous
12/23/19, 12:00 PM
best work on here in months
Anonymous
12/23/19, 6:03 AM
Incredibly hot. 5/5
Dec 22, 2019
Willie Cici
12/23/19, 4:17 AM
That was amazing!! In a weird way, I'm jealous that I didn't come up with a story like this. I can't wait to see you some more of your work.
12/23/19, 3:12 AM
Adding more plot. There will be mind control in future branches! I may have to write a FAILURE ending next to get some of my ideas down :)
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/23/19, 12:22 AM
maybe a cowboy convention, lots of manly gay cowboys and twinky cowbois fucking
Lusty Stallion
12/22/19, 11:18 PM
I'm up for it and take the point. Always looking to improve. Who wants to make some cool wishes for me to medal with?
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/22/19, 8:58 PM
continue please
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/22/19, 8:51 PM
he does have a point, you should try innovate a bit