Recent Comments

12/21/19, 9:07 PM
This is just getting better and better!
12/21/19, 7:35 PM
I already started work on part 3. Thank you for the encouragement.
Anonymous
12/21/19, 6:27 PM
Amazing story....exactly what I want to happen to me. It would be a dream come true. Thanks so much for taking the time to write and post this fantastic work, and I look forward to more. OMG it's perfect.
Anonymous
12/21/19, 6:00 PM
I came so hard from this
12/21/19, 4:43 PM
@Stroppy author I made this a community story that anyone can edit for a reason. Especially with these "failures" I'd like to see people edit and extend the humiliation involved if they've got better ideas for how Jeffrey should lose the game. If you want to add your idea on to this existing ending, go ahead! Think of these "failure" branches as those elaborate, extended game over sequences in some old games where they go on for a long time showing just how badly you messed up. I look forward to seeing what you come up with!
Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:29 PM
This story was incredible!! Inventive and hot!!!
Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:23 PM
damn I wish I was Joey..
Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:23 PM
What makes it interesting is that the protagonist is also affected!
Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:19 PM
Would love to read more, but the writing is blah. Did you even proof your story?
Anonymous
12/21/19, 3:38 PM
Loving this! Hoping there's going to be some kilt fucking. There is not enough kilt porn out there for a Scotsman like me!