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12/21/19, 4:07 AM
I very much like how you kept up the original "flavor" and even introduced some new ideas that I hadn't thought of (like trying to flee the town and the frat's response to that). Overall this was very hot. I may try my hand at writing one of the choices you offered.
12/21/19, 4:04 AM
@Varlance Good question! I understand your concern about the number of branching paths. I envision a plot structure where each subsequent "round" of the game is a continuation of every path where Jeffrey doesn't lose. E.g. the part covering the start of Round 2 on the next day follows a victorious Jeff whether he played as a Hunter or a Hunted. In this way, all the plot branches reconverge at the start of each subsequent round. Of course, this may not work exactly as planned, but that's how I envision it. Writing paths where all choices end in failure is okay, as is writing continuations to failure chapters (though I had those in mind as "dead ends" where the reader returns to the chapter index). I would like there to be at least one continuous "timeline" where Jeffrey wins the game, though. Thanks for your interest!
Brandon V L
12/21/19, 2:58 AM
This is hot. it reminds me of the time my teammates played a slightly less gay campus wide game of assassin, with the loser being forced to get dry humped in public. The "worst" that happened was we had to kiss the ass of the champion. This version seems much, much more fun. Great story telling, as fun as the first. Hope this project turns out as successfully with all the chapters!
12/21/19, 2:34 AM
I really like this story. I hope you can find inspiration to finish it on your own.
12/21/19, 1:52 AM
@Martin - thanks for looking at it! @A Voyeur Fan - I have a couple of questions about how the choices will work. In many branching stories of this nature (I once tried to write a CHYOA story on CHYOA.com) the number of branches quickly grows beyond the capacity of authors to bring resolution to all the paths. I guess that doesn't matter hugely if we are mainly in this for fun and sexy times. Do you have any specific hopes with regard to this? For example would you be okay for authors to write chapters where all paths end in failure (though not too early on in the story of course)? What about when an author labels a choice as a failure but the next person decides to write that choice as a continuation of the story, or the opposite where a continuation path is turned into a game over?
12/21/19, 1:40 AM
Thanks, anonymous commenter! I'm really glad that this entry wasn't terrible for you! I know what you mean. I wanted to keep the story going in the same kind of world and style that A Voyeur Fan started it with.
Anonymous
12/21/19, 1:30 AM
I really liked the style of the original first chapter and was afraid that different people writing it would make the story seem different to read, but I am loving this new chapter! Looking forward to more.
Anonymous
12/21/19, 12:47 AM
more Please- we need to finish the whole thing!!!!
Martin
12/20/19, 11:07 PM
> Hi Martin, I did manage to edit it. It seems to be the case that I can’t edit it when logged in maybe because AVF is the owner of the series, but when I’m logged out I can use the email link to make changes. That sounds like a bug. My machine is currently not ready to do any programming, but I'll look into that as soon as possible.
UchihaDEMS
12/20/19, 10:26 PM
Nice, I'm curious and hopefully many people would participate <3