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Stroppy author
12/21/19, 3:03 PM
Edit this ending so they take him back to the frat house and give him the antidote...and re-enslave him, again and again as part of his week of hell. Clueless that he's ever been captured, his hell week goes on for months
12/21/19, 11:19 AM
@A Voyeur Fan - Thanks :) To achieve branches converging like you describe, branches could contain hyperlinks to existing chapters, or such links or instructions could be added afterwards (perhaps when a lot of the story has been contributed already). Anyway maybe I'm overthinking it at this stage. Looking forward to new chapters :)
Lusty Stallion
12/21/19, 11:14 AM
Thanks Cutler. you're right, I ticked the wrong one. Is that something you'd like to see in future stories, or pleased it's not?
Anonymous
12/21/19, 10:17 AM
This is such a hot series. Love the descriptions during the hot and heavy parts.
12/21/19, 10:07 AM
Great story! Loved it! Why is there a gay to straight tag? I don't recall anyone becoming straight. Did you mean to select straight to gay instead?
Anonymous
12/21/19, 7:10 AM
I very much liked the first Part and now the second is well written and very arousing too. To the options, since the hunters aren-t Sure where Jeffrey really is, why not let take one of the sexually actiive guys guns and hunt the Hinter, even if only as a Distractions to flee. How ever it will continud i am exited. Please write more.
Anonymous
12/21/19, 6:20 AM
agree with the previous comment ... love the way the series is going .... thing s which are unique to this story .. keeps it interesting .... continue please
12/21/19, 4:07 AM
I very much like how you kept up the original "flavor" and even introduced some new ideas that I hadn't thought of (like trying to flee the town and the frat's response to that). Overall this was very hot. I may try my hand at writing one of the choices you offered.
12/21/19, 4:04 AM
@Varlance Good question! I understand your concern about the number of branching paths. I envision a plot structure where each subsequent "round" of the game is a continuation of every path where Jeffrey doesn't lose. E.g. the part covering the start of Round 2 on the next day follows a victorious Jeff whether he played as a Hunter or a Hunted. In this way, all the plot branches reconverge at the start of each subsequent round. Of course, this may not work exactly as planned, but that's how I envision it. Writing paths where all choices end in failure is okay, as is writing continuations to failure chapters (though I had those in mind as "dead ends" where the reader returns to the chapter index). I would like there to be at least one continuous "timeline" where Jeffrey wins the game, though. Thanks for your interest!
Brandon V L
12/21/19, 2:58 AM
This is hot. it reminds me of the time my teammates played a slightly less gay campus wide game of assassin, with the loser being forced to get dry humped in public. The "worst" that happened was we had to kiss the ass of the champion. This version seems much, much more fun. Great story telling, as fun as the first. Hope this project turns out as successfully with all the chapters!