Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/21/19, 3:38 PM
Loving this! Hoping there's going to be some kilt fucking. There is not enough kilt porn out there for a Scotsman like me!
Stroppy author
12/21/19, 3:03 PM
Edit this ending so they take him back to the frat house and give him the antidote...and re-enslave him, again and again as part of his week of hell. Clueless that he's ever been captured, his hell week goes on for months
12/21/19, 11:19 AM
@A Voyeur Fan - Thanks :) To achieve branches converging like you describe, branches could contain hyperlinks to existing chapters, or such links or instructions could be added afterwards (perhaps when a lot of the story has been contributed already). Anyway maybe I'm overthinking it at this stage. Looking forward to new chapters :)
Lusty Stallion
12/21/19, 11:14 AM
Thanks Cutler. you're right, I ticked the wrong one. Is that something you'd like to see in future stories, or pleased it's not?
Anonymous
12/21/19, 10:17 AM
This is such a hot series. Love the descriptions during the hot and heavy parts.
12/21/19, 10:07 AM
Great story! Loved it! Why is there a gay to straight tag? I don't recall anyone becoming straight. Did you mean to select straight to gay instead?
Anonymous
12/21/19, 7:10 AM
I very much liked the first Part and now the second is well written and very arousing too. To the options, since the hunters aren-t Sure where Jeffrey really is, why not let take one of the sexually actiive guys guns and hunt the Hinter, even if only as a Distractions to flee. How ever it will continud i am exited. Please write more.
Anonymous
12/21/19, 6:20 AM
agree with the previous comment ... love the way the series is going .... thing s which are unique to this story .. keeps it interesting .... continue please
12/21/19, 4:07 AM
I very much like how you kept up the original "flavor" and even introduced some new ideas that I hadn't thought of (like trying to flee the town and the frat's response to that). Overall this was very hot. I may try my hand at writing one of the choices you offered.
12/21/19, 4:04 AM
@Varlance Good question! I understand your concern about the number of branching paths. I envision a plot structure where each subsequent "round" of the game is a continuation of every path where Jeffrey doesn't lose. E.g. the part covering the start of Round 2 on the next day follows a victorious Jeff whether he played as a Hunter or a Hunted. In this way, all the plot branches reconverge at the start of each subsequent round. Of course, this may not work exactly as planned, but that's how I envision it. Writing paths where all choices end in failure is okay, as is writing continuations to failure chapters (though I had those in mind as "dead ends" where the reader returns to the chapter index). I would like there to be at least one continuous "timeline" where Jeffrey wins the game, though. Thanks for your interest!