Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/22/19, 12:05 AM
Incredibly excited for more of this.
Lusty Stallion
12/21/19, 10:42 PM
Go on Mr. anonymous. Make a few wishes here & i'll see if i can make your wish of proper alterations true. I'm honestly open to all ideas. Maybe the wishes should be more generic?
12/21/19, 9:07 PM
This is just getting better and better!
12/21/19, 7:35 PM
I already started work on part 3. Thank you for the encouragement.
Anonymous
12/21/19, 6:27 PM
Amazing story....exactly what I want to happen to me. It would be a dream come true. Thanks so much for taking the time to write and post this fantastic work, and I look forward to more. OMG it's perfect.
Anonymous
12/21/19, 6:00 PM
I came so hard from this
12/21/19, 4:43 PM
@Stroppy author I made this a community story that anyone can edit for a reason. Especially with these "failures" I'd like to see people edit and extend the humiliation involved if they've got better ideas for how Jeffrey should lose the game. If you want to add your idea on to this existing ending, go ahead! Think of these "failure" branches as those elaborate, extended game over sequences in some old games where they go on for a long time showing just how badly you messed up. I look forward to seeing what you come up with!
Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:29 PM
This story was incredible!! Inventive and hot!!!
Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:23 PM
damn I wish I was Joey..
Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:23 PM
What makes it interesting is that the protagonist is also affected!