Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/21/19, 1:30 AM
I really liked the style of the original first chapter and was afraid that different people writing it would make the story seem different to read, but I am loving this new chapter! Looking forward to more.
Anonymous
12/21/19, 12:47 AM
more Please- we need to finish the whole thing!!!!
Martin
12/20/19, 11:07 PM
> Hi Martin, I did manage to edit it. It seems to be the case that I can’t edit it when logged in maybe because AVF is the owner of the series, but when I’m logged out I can use the email link to make changes. That sounds like a bug. My machine is currently not ready to do any programming, but I'll look into that as soon as possible.
UchihaDEMS
12/20/19, 10:26 PM
Nice, I'm curious and hopefully many people would participate <3
Anonymous
12/20/19, 10:06 PM
Nice twist at the end!
12/20/19, 9:54 PM
Thanks for your submission, Varlance! I love what you've done with my concept. I'm going to publish a chapter examining Path 3 to give people an idea of what failure and being brainwashed by the serum feels like from the perspective of the target. Other than that, I can't wait to see how this series continues!
Wondering
12/20/19, 9:10 PM
will there be another chapter of this? I'm hooked on these "normal straight dude turned into a cock craving plaything for others to use" stories
Apr 4, 2017
turbo2600
12/20/19, 8:39 PM
Man, what a great story. I wish this would happen to me! Maybe in a way it is... I like how he was traumatized at first with the thinning hair, then accepted it. It's happening to me. I get turned on at the thought of going bald now. i just gotta pack on the pounds and have the fur grow in elsewhere!
KJ
12/20/19, 7:53 PM
Good foundation! I came back to read it a second time.
Whatalooker
12/20/19, 7:49 PM
i truly enjoyed reading part one more part two of the story. At first i thought Robin and Batman were going swap bodies, but having the switch done with the Joker was an interesting turn of events. You did Capture the character of the Joker very well; yet i would liked to have read more about Robin/Nightwing. Lastly, there was little to nothing written on how the machine conducted the transformation - it just seemed to happen. Well, i am looking forward to reading another story involving body swapping of superheroes with either each other; dominate with his side knick or a dominate superhero with a lesser known one.