Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/21/19, 6:00 PM
I came so hard from this
12/21/19, 4:43 PM
@Stroppy author I made this a community story that anyone can edit for a reason. Especially with these "failures" I'd like to see people edit and extend the humiliation involved if they've got better ideas for how Jeffrey should lose the game. If you want to add your idea on to this existing ending, go ahead! Think of these "failure" branches as those elaborate, extended game over sequences in some old games where they go on for a long time showing just how badly you messed up. I look forward to seeing what you come up with!
Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:29 PM
This story was incredible!! Inventive and hot!!!
Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:23 PM
damn I wish I was Joey..
Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:23 PM
What makes it interesting is that the protagonist is also affected!
Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:19 PM
Would love to read more, but the writing is blah. Did you even proof your story?
Anonymous
12/21/19, 3:38 PM
Loving this! Hoping there's going to be some kilt fucking. There is not enough kilt porn out there for a Scotsman like me!
Stroppy author
12/21/19, 3:03 PM
Edit this ending so they take him back to the frat house and give him the antidote...and re-enslave him, again and again as part of his week of hell. Clueless that he's ever been captured, his hell week goes on for months
12/21/19, 11:19 AM
@A Voyeur Fan - Thanks :) To achieve branches converging like you describe, branches could contain hyperlinks to existing chapters, or such links or instructions could be added afterwards (perhaps when a lot of the story has been contributed already). Anyway maybe I'm overthinking it at this stage. Looking forward to new chapters :)
Lusty Stallion
12/21/19, 11:14 AM
Thanks Cutler. you're right, I ticked the wrong one. Is that something you'd like to see in future stories, or pleased it's not?