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Brandon V L
12/21/19, 2:58 AM
This is hot. it reminds me of the time my teammates played a slightly less gay campus wide game of assassin, with the loser being forced to get dry humped in public. The "worst" that happened was we had to kiss the ass of the champion. This version seems much, much more fun. Great story telling, as fun as the first. Hope this project turns out as successfully with all the chapters!
12/21/19, 2:34 AM
I really like this story. I hope you can find inspiration to finish it on your own.
12/21/19, 1:52 AM
@Martin - thanks for looking at it! @A Voyeur Fan - I have a couple of questions about how the choices will work. In many branching stories of this nature (I once tried to write a CHYOA story on CHYOA.com) the number of branches quickly grows beyond the capacity of authors to bring resolution to all the paths. I guess that doesn't matter hugely if we are mainly in this for fun and sexy times. Do you have any specific hopes with regard to this? For example would you be okay for authors to write chapters where all paths end in failure (though not too early on in the story of course)? What about when an author labels a choice as a failure but the next person decides to write that choice as a continuation of the story, or the opposite where a continuation path is turned into a game over?
12/21/19, 1:40 AM
Thanks, anonymous commenter! I'm really glad that this entry wasn't terrible for you! I know what you mean. I wanted to keep the story going in the same kind of world and style that A Voyeur Fan started it with.
Anonymous
12/21/19, 1:30 AM
I really liked the style of the original first chapter and was afraid that different people writing it would make the story seem different to read, but I am loving this new chapter! Looking forward to more.
Anonymous
12/21/19, 12:47 AM
more Please- we need to finish the whole thing!!!!
Martin
12/20/19, 11:07 PM
> Hi Martin, I did manage to edit it. It seems to be the case that I can’t edit it when logged in maybe because AVF is the owner of the series, but when I’m logged out I can use the email link to make changes. That sounds like a bug. My machine is currently not ready to do any programming, but I'll look into that as soon as possible.
UchihaDEMS
12/20/19, 10:26 PM
Nice, I'm curious and hopefully many people would participate <3
Anonymous
12/20/19, 10:06 PM
Nice twist at the end!
12/20/19, 9:54 PM
Thanks for your submission, Varlance! I love what you've done with my concept. I'm going to publish a chapter examining Path 3 to give people an idea of what failure and being brainwashed by the serum feels like from the perspective of the target. Other than that, I can't wait to see how this series continues!