Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/19/19, 8:55 AM
This is fantastic!
Ed2you2
12/19/19, 8:45 AM
Would love to see where this can go.
Anonymous
12/19/19, 8:17 AM
We need more, please
Boston Satyr
12/19/19, 3:07 AM
One could write an entire dissertation on how this is an allegory for the U.S.'s Middle East politics and warefare actions. Hot and wickedly clever. Bravo!
Bibimbap
12/19/19, 2:49 AM
I really sorry for your loss. My deepest condolences. I really sorry, I don't want to be impertinent. Take your time, and my best wishes for you. Best regards and big hug from Mexico.
Anonymous
12/19/19, 1:02 AM
i've read this, Sub X, and your Switcher? (I think it was called that, about the guy who takes over guys' bodies) series, they've all got interesting concepts. This felt sort of like a halfway between the latter two, but I think Sub X remains my favorite due to the gratuitous sex and strong concept (Random sex-zombie orgies, hard to go wrong with that). Switcher is not really my thing (A little too light on erotica and too big on pain/ruining lives for me, but despite not starting the story being interested in humiliation, the embarrassment of the guys the protag took over did get a little fun), but it was slightly appealing with having a twisted/sadistic narrator. This kinda bridges the two with having a sexy plot with a protagonist who slowly starts abusing his powers, but it feels like it stops short before we get to the sex scenes as good/big as Sub X’s or the perversity of Switcher (now that would be a concept, while I’m thinking about it) It was easy for me to read in one sitting, but I was kinda expecting a bigger climax. The ending was cute, though, and I feel like it’s, as the above commenter said, a wholesome ending. One big point I really like about all your stories though is how diverse every character is and you’re explicit about it: there’s a white, black, Hispanic, Asian, etc character in every one I’ve read, and more than just a single one, too, all different types of hot. I’m looking forward to your next story based off that alone: Sub X is still one of this site’s best for me, but I’m happy you got to write the story you wanted, as it’s still solid action-wise and sexy enough.
Lusty Stallion
12/19/19, 12:02 AM
we want more man! loving the concept!
Slave Abdamelek
12/18/19, 11:50 PM
Nycboot, thank you very much for following it and for taking your time to write this appreciation. I'm glad you liked it, especially the psychology. I certainly loved writing it but mostly sharing it. I wrote it completely but the tag "Community Series" means anyone can add chapters if they like. It would be very exciting to me if someone, somewhere would play in my sandbox writing from their point of view.
12/18/19, 10:49 PM
That's exciting news. Looking forward to it Pup Don!
Rubbercub
12/18/19, 9:45 PM
I want more Dad and Son breeding