Recent Comments

Slave Abdamelek
12/18/19, 11:50 PM
Nycboot, thank you very much for following it and for taking your time to write this appreciation. I'm glad you liked it, especially the psychology. I certainly loved writing it but mostly sharing it. I wrote it completely but the tag "Community Series" means anyone can add chapters if they like. It would be very exciting to me if someone, somewhere would play in my sandbox writing from their point of view.
12/18/19, 10:49 PM
That's exciting news. Looking forward to it Pup Don!
Rubbercub
12/18/19, 9:45 PM
I want more Dad and Son breeding
Anonymous
12/18/19, 7:10 PM
eagerly awaiting the next installment
Anonymous
12/18/19, 6:57 PM
Such a sweet and holesome ending!
12/18/19, 6:48 PM
fair points in the comments. i hope y'all still got something out of it ^^
Anonymous
12/18/19, 6:21 PM
Good start to the story, but the ending felt like a solid, meh. There was all this buildup and then it felt like you weren't sure how to finish it.
12/18/19, 6:17 PM
All I'm saying at this point is that there will be a bit of a shift in the story over the next few chapters. The lead FBI agent knows damned well that something is up, and Peter knows that she knows, even if she can't prove it yet. What would you do if you were doing something highly illegal and knew that the FBI was holding a grudge towards you?
12/18/19, 4:54 PM
Bibimbap, there is more coming, I promise! The next chapter is almost done. I've been traveling for wonderful reasons and also dealing with a personal tragedy. So I'm a little behind. But I have every intention of finishing the story. There are new characters coming and the mystery of why this is happening will become apparent. Its all in my head, I just need to find the time to type it out. I'm traveling and will he home just after Christmas. Expect more then. Have a happy holiday!
TcomJ
12/18/19, 4:38 PM
dude, you are like the few of writers here that I find I am looking forward to read even if the series is long. and you know what? write more. lol Is he going back to get Lucas and the original boys back? :p