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nycboot
12/16/19, 1:50 AM
Oh man! What an incredible story on so many levels. On the one hand, it resembles Harry Potter with all the twists and turns - like a roller coaster of wondering who is going to win (but you've written it in such a way as to identify with the Pharaoh). Egyptology used to be a big interest of mine so I enjoy recognizing the names, as well as the significance of the snake and Osiris. As someone also into Master/slave relationships/dynamics, you so wonderfully capture the psychology of that kind of relationship and tease it out for all its worth - wonderful. That dynamic plays out so many times it's exhausting - I'm glad I gave the story a break in the middle and only returned to it a few days ago. It really speaks to an author who is thoroughly familiar with the slave dynamic and who has captured so beautifully the desire for it. Bravo. Really a very satisfying story. One thing I don't understand: all the chapters have that template, "This is a community series!" But it's clear this has been the work of a single author. Was that a mistake?
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/15/19, 11:06 PM
I read them
Lusty Stallion
12/15/19, 10:48 PM
joaopomilio@hotmail.com - check out my Fantasy boy series. Click me as an author and enjoy. Lots of bar transforming going on there
Seattlerunner
12/15/19, 10:10 PM
that story made me trancy myself.
Anonymous
12/15/19, 6:43 PM
This was amazing!!
Maniacanonymous
12/15/19, 5:29 PM
hey so when is the next chapter coming? So impatient. Cant wait.
toy #4
12/15/19, 3:03 PM
Oh, no! Did they already get to the narrator? Is that why the last installment has not been posted?
Anonymous
12/15/19, 9:56 AM
Awesome.
Apr 6, 2019
Anonymous
12/15/19, 8:51 AM
Very hot! Would love to see a sequel if you're up for one.
Anonymous
12/15/19, 8:33 AM
voyeur fan i would love to work on part 3 when you done. I love the black guys in the story oh my god so hot. I love it