Recent Comments

Martin
12/14/19, 1:10 PM
Really not bad for a first attempt. Made me very hard! :) Thanks and keep on writing!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/14/19, 1:04 PM
I see your points and I agree with them, but still I think it should be explained why is Xander so scared of coming out of the closet
dogdaes@yahoo.com
12/14/19, 11:44 AM
Bi curious and would love a drink in that bar
Anonymous
12/14/19, 11:14 AM
Author here. Question for readers. More pups or other rubber animals?
Evan
12/14/19, 7:58 AM
Love a good backfire story. Well done!
12/14/19, 7:01 AM
Really interesting. Many places this story could go.
Anonymous
12/14/19, 5:57 AM
Bobby, I truly enjoyed the concept of this story. The personas you came up with were great and hot. I think I have an idea as to what the previous comments are alluding to. I think there was a bit too much detail put into describing all the minor aspects of each personality that aren't truly necessary. I would recommend for more of the writing to be focused on the story itself rather than the details on how the personalities work. Again, I love the idea behind this story and will be reading the next chapters right now!
Anonymous
12/14/19, 5:36 AM
This was such a great idea for a story. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
12/14/19, 5:29 AM
I liked this. i like my heroes competent, so the fact that they caught him every time he changed reality was a nice change of pace. And while i agree with the above commenter that Xander is young and allowed to make mistakes it's nice to see consequences for his actions. He's been spying on all of them without their consent since he got their after all. Most importantly, he would rather change people and reality than be brave enough to come out. it's interesting to note that in all the "gay" realities all the other heroes KNOW he's gay and none of them really cared. so he's basically proven he could come out but is too afraid to see it. honestly, If this was a standard story I'd assume Nova can't be changed because he's actually already gay, but even farther in the closet than Xander. But the 4D vision watch makes me wonder if that's the case. Might just be because he's from out of time. we shall see. keep up the good work.
12/14/19, 5:22 AM
That was great!