Recent Comments

kingsyx1@gmail.com
12/14/19, 1:25 PM
Hey so to all the new readers I apologize for the typos! This is my first story and I'm learning the submission method and spell checker thingy. I wish it was easier to edit on the fly but im making due. the next chapter with the changes will be coming very soon. If you have any recommendations please comment :) If you liked it so far please comment and rate :)
EntrancedGay92
12/14/19, 1:16 PM
Superb work as always! What I love the most about this series is how damn perfect Peter is at bringing people under his control. For me, the hottest parts aren't always the sex scenes (though they are amazing), it's how absolutely unaware his victims are they've been enslaved in the web. When Ally saw Ricardo walk out of his cell, that was way more arousing to me than the fucking because I knew that Ricardo had become one of Peter's boys, and that unaware enslavement is my favorite. As always I look forward to the next installment.
Martin
12/14/19, 1:12 PM
> Author here. Question for readers. More pups or other rubber animals? Was it intentional that you didn't set an author's name? "Anonymous" is quite, well, anonymous... :) You can still change the author name by editing the story yourself!
Martin
12/14/19, 1:10 PM
Really not bad for a first attempt. Made me very hard! :) Thanks and keep on writing!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/14/19, 1:04 PM
I see your points and I agree with them, but still I think it should be explained why is Xander so scared of coming out of the closet
dogdaes@yahoo.com
12/14/19, 11:44 AM
Bi curious and would love a drink in that bar
Anonymous
12/14/19, 11:14 AM
Author here. Question for readers. More pups or other rubber animals?
Evan
12/14/19, 7:58 AM
Love a good backfire story. Well done!
12/14/19, 7:01 AM
Really interesting. Many places this story could go.
Anonymous
12/14/19, 5:57 AM
Bobby, I truly enjoyed the concept of this story. The personas you came up with were great and hot. I think I have an idea as to what the previous comments are alluding to. I think there was a bit too much detail put into describing all the minor aspects of each personality that aren't truly necessary. I would recommend for more of the writing to be focused on the story itself rather than the details on how the personalities work. Again, I love the idea behind this story and will be reading the next chapters right now!