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Anonymous
12/14/19, 5:36 AM
This was such a great idea for a story. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
12/14/19, 5:29 AM
I liked this. i like my heroes competent, so the fact that they caught him every time he changed reality was a nice change of pace. And while i agree with the above commenter that Xander is young and allowed to make mistakes it's nice to see consequences for his actions. He's been spying on all of them without their consent since he got their after all. Most importantly, he would rather change people and reality than be brave enough to come out. it's interesting to note that in all the "gay" realities all the other heroes KNOW he's gay and none of them really cared. so he's basically proven he could come out but is too afraid to see it. honestly, If this was a standard story I'd assume Nova can't be changed because he's actually already gay, but even farther in the closet than Xander. But the 4D vision watch makes me wonder if that's the case. Might just be because he's from out of time. we shall see. keep up the good work.
12/14/19, 5:22 AM
That was great!
Anonymous
12/14/19, 3:44 AM
it should go colleges & high schools!!
Sceadu
12/14/19, 3:09 AM
There seems to be some distinction between the different *timelines* and the different *realities*, so it would make sense that Zack!Nova can't possibly be anything but straight in a reality in which Zack!Zeal is straight. But we never see any reality in which they're gay or even bi, and Fuxer's effort there having no effect whatsoever points to something deeper. I'd say that there is no reality in which Zack!Nova fulfills the conditions that Xander wants, either because Nova/Zeal wouldn't be in the BOI / Manly League for whatever reason (“there isn't a team of heroes in every timeline”, that might be so for realities too), because Zeal (and perhaps Nova) would be dead by now (maybe because of Zeal trying to fuck a colleague while trying to save the world, maybe because of awful bigot parents), or, as the blackness seems to suggest... because the universe got destroyed (by Chronofax's hands, perhaps?).
Slave Abdamelek
12/14/19, 12:16 AM
Thank you very much. I would love to check out your stories if you tell me the titles. As you may see, the story has no possible ending since it is a conflict between two immortal beings. The next iteration will come in some time. Meanwhile, the next generation of Soldiers grows silently. And Horemheb enters the outside world.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/14/19, 12:13 AM
he is just a teen he can make up for his hormone driven mistakes and be the hero he dreams to be
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/13/19, 11:42 PM
maybe a cowboy convention, lots of manly gay cowboys and twinky cowbois fucking, also it would be nice to see how genie deal with a well-meaning but misinformed guy.
Lusty Stallion
12/13/19, 11:38 PM
Thanks Cutler. here would you like to see Genie go next?
Anonymous
12/13/19, 10:31 PM
Amazing!!!