Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/9/19, 1:32 AM
Very eager for the next part! Great story!
12/9/19, 1:30 AM
The writing on this has been excellent so far. Definitely feels like a super hero story. Which has kept me going with it, until now. Now I’m extremely excited to get to more the reality warping :)
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/9/19, 12:47 AM
including they banging
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/9/19, 12:46 AM
I hope the changes begun soon, I want to see the heroes turning gay, also I hope we can see Omen's husband in the future
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/9/19, 12:41 AM
lets see how the boss is doing
Anonymous
12/9/19, 12:33 AM
a deaf?
Dec 7, 2019
Anonymous
12/8/19, 11:36 PM
That was hot. I'm usually not into the absorbtion thing, but I can't resist a hot muscular Coach type. Love how the absorbing made him grow.
boi98229
12/8/19, 11:36 PM
Not sure how it might work, but as bak2jak suggested, hearing a little from Chris's point of view might be really hot. You could use an expression of this thoughts to highlight his confusion, and his mental transition from skater boy to gay houseboy and hypnoslave. Chris is experiencing a change of mental focus from downtrodden teen skater boy to a prized and loved gay submissive whose new focus is worshiping his new Daddies, relying on their guidance, and slavish obedience to their commands and needs. That process, which you have already established is incredibly hot for me. I fantasize about experiencing this myself, so elaborate on the process, including Chris's murky thoughts and feelings, so this story which is already enthralling might get even hotter. Thanks so much. Looking forward to more - in whatever way you see fit to extend the story. ~david
Anonymous
12/8/19, 10:14 PM
I'm ecstatic gay things are starting to happen! I've gotten pretty invested in Xander getting some superhero tail. Love what you're doing with this story!
Anonymous
12/8/19, 10:11 PM
the one immune is the boss, isnt?