Recent Comments

lucasthemighty@gmail.com
12/8/19, 11:21 AM
Awesome story! Hope to see another chapter!
Anonymous
12/8/19, 6:34 AM
Hey, I loved your story, and hope there's more. I read these comments often (I have no life), and I didn't see anything wrong with the "better if" comment above. He said it was a great story, and this is a comment section for giving writers feeback and ideas. I'm not a writer on here, but I'd think that most writers appreciate comments. The comment above probably could have been worded better, but maybe he's just making suggestions for a future story that the reader would like to see. If the writer likes the ideas expressed, maybe they make it into a story. I could be totally off base, but the tone of the comment above does not seem belligerent. There are very few ways to suggest ideas to writers for stories. I'd assume that if someone is suggesting an idea, it's because they like the writers style and work. Just my 2 cents. Please keep writing. I don't care if it's your own ideas, or you take the suggestions from people in this forum.
12/8/19, 5:49 AM
Great Story! I hope you write more!
Anonymous
12/8/19, 3:10 AM
great job
Dec 7, 2019
BostonSatyr
12/7/19, 10:44 PM
absolutely love this . more please!!
Anonymous
12/7/19, 4:54 PM
This definitely needs to be continued!!
Dec 7, 2019
12/7/19, 4:52 PM
In the end the nerd persisted even as they were forcefully merged into one. I like this kind of dynamics.
Anonymous
12/7/19, 4:08 PM
Hot enough to wait for the next part.
12/7/19, 4:05 PM
I loved that! Hopefully there'll be of this!
Dec 7, 2019
Anonymous
12/7/19, 3:42 PM
Fuckin' HOT! Love it!