Recent Comments

12/5/19, 3:49 PM
Wonderful. A good idea well executed. Surely Mr. Olivera and Jimmy Swetson will appear later? It would be downright unjust if they didn't get their share of the fun.
Anonymous
12/5/19, 10:54 AM
Hot! Love the transformation from twink to hairy REAL man!
Dec 3, 2019
nerdysuitedbaby
12/5/19, 9:19 AM
Nice to see smoother suited story. a few sparkling errors but I enjoyed it. Only thing I would say is more detail especially in the clothing. Also maybe a little resistance as I feel it's to soon personally to have his spirit broken being that he was able to be snapped out of the trance. Even if he talked to Mr. JJ or Regan briefly about trying to get or of there and figure out what is going on and trying to get out of his predicament.
Demospam7@hotmail.nl
12/5/19, 9:02 AM
That was an awesome read. 10/10 can't wait for more
12/5/19, 8:14 AM
Lmao yeah I did on accident. I flipped the title and the 1st chapter's name around. It's fixed now tho just needs to be updated. Please feel free to leave as detailed review as you lot can ok? I'm mostly doing this because porn is a great way to get better at descriptions. The first two chapters were written and posted on other sites a while ago and I'm currently 1/2~ done with the 3rd but I'm not sure when I'll finish it.
Martin
12/5/19, 8:02 AM
Did you mix up the name of the whole series and the individual story names? It looks to me like that. If you want to change that, you can alter the series name in the series view (where all its stories are listed) with the "Administration" menu on top. And the individual story names can be changed when editing them.
boi98229
12/5/19, 7:42 AM
i am a sucker (literally and figuratively) for man scent, mind control, hypnosis, slow entrancing seductions, Dominance/submission, and alt/emo boy style. So as you might guess, i found your story enthralling, and like Chris i am ready for he next chapter.
Dec 4, 2019
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/5/19, 6:47 AM
Love it when a strong man makes me his femmed bitch!
Anonymous
12/5/19, 6:16 AM
hot. Would be good if matt kept his muscles as a slutty bottom.
Anonymous
12/5/19, 6:02 AM
great story and writing. love when a muscle stud gets his dick shrunk. For me it would have been hotter if he kept his muscles and still looked like a stud, but became a slutty pussy bitch controlled by the 18 yo. has to sexually service other guys, is totally humiliated but that turns him on and makes him want more. Be hot if he ended up as a hot tiny dicked (3" hard is pretty generous lol) muscle stud/pussy bitch who gets off on being humiliated and used by a bunch of 18 yo college kids. The younger guy ends up controlling his life, money, career, business. Maybe makes him do a whole porn series about a hot older stud who turns into a pussy bitch for younger dorks/nerds. Making him wear slutty panties and lingerie would be hot too. :)