Recent Comments

LC
12/6/19, 1:02 AM
incredible story, can't wait to read what you write next!
Anonymous
12/6/19, 12:27 AM
yesssss so great to see you writing! this was really hot 襤
12/5/19, 4:52 PM
All in good time. >:-) There are still two more departments to visit before the finale.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
12/5/19, 4:31 PM
I am open to being hypnotized, hope to hear from you or anyone else interested in putting me under.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/5/19, 3:55 PM
I agree, make them a couple
12/5/19, 3:49 PM
Wonderful. A good idea well executed. Surely Mr. Olivera and Jimmy Swetson will appear later? It would be downright unjust if they didn't get their share of the fun.
Anonymous
12/5/19, 10:54 AM
Hot! Love the transformation from twink to hairy REAL man!
Dec 3, 2019
nerdysuitedbaby
12/5/19, 9:19 AM
Nice to see smoother suited story. a few sparkling errors but I enjoyed it. Only thing I would say is more detail especially in the clothing. Also maybe a little resistance as I feel it's to soon personally to have his spirit broken being that he was able to be snapped out of the trance. Even if he talked to Mr. JJ or Regan briefly about trying to get or of there and figure out what is going on and trying to get out of his predicament.
Demospam7@hotmail.nl
12/5/19, 9:02 AM
That was an awesome read. 10/10 can't wait for more
12/5/19, 8:14 AM
Lmao yeah I did on accident. I flipped the title and the 1st chapter's name around. It's fixed now tho just needs to be updated. Please feel free to leave as detailed review as you lot can ok? I'm mostly doing this because porn is a great way to get better at descriptions. The first two chapters were written and posted on other sites a while ago and I'm currently 1/2~ done with the 3rd but I'm not sure when I'll finish it.