Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/3/19, 6:05 AM
please continue this story! love it!
Anonymous
12/3/19, 5:57 AM
my favorite premise on here in a while, a lot of potential for the mall. keep going!
Drake Nightstorm
12/3/19, 5:38 AM
DMears You are sweet. I really apperciate your understanding. By the way. I sort of take ideas at times, not all of them mind you. If you or anyone reading these wants to shoot out a story idea and I like it. I may use it on the next installment, no promises just a thought.
12/3/19, 5:34 AM
Damn! I understand that problem. Definitely take the time to heal and write when you're ready! Best of luck and looking forward to the stuff you put out!
Anonymous
12/3/19, 4:49 AM
Excellent beginning! Can't wait for the other departments .
Drake Nightstorm
12/3/19, 4:31 AM
Part 2 will be coming as soon as I know when my wrist is healed up. I had a small fall at work and there is an appointment in the morning. Currently it's very difficult to type with a brace on. As soon as the brace can come off, I will try to work on part two, perhaps some inspiration will hit me between now and then. I really apperciate all of the encouragment.
Anonymous
12/3/19, 3:51 AM
LOVED the subtle exchange of control and the name change. my favorite is friendly daddies who ignore their prey. hoping we see a part 2 where Chris's hair is buzzed off :)
Anonymous
12/3/19, 2:41 AM
Is there going to be a part two, and three and maybe four? Hint? Hint!
Anonymous
12/3/19, 2:12 AM
Great story. Very hot indeed but isnt it just a written out version of this manga? https://myreadingmanga.info/ducka-precious-mail-eng/ Its pretty much the exact same thing. Just doesnt seem very original.
12/2/19, 10:12 PM
Damn dude! Off to a great start! Any idea when part 2 could be heading our way? Love this series and can't wait to see what happens next!