Recent Comments

12/4/19, 12:31 AM
Very creative. Great story. Loved how you did the mental changes, forgeting and accepting.
Beardfull1
12/3/19, 11:42 PM
As always your stories hit all the right buttons for me! You know you have in me your biggest fan! Please keep writing. You feed my wildest fantasies!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/3/19, 4:06 PM
lets see how part 3 turns out
Dec 3, 2019
Anonymous
12/3/19, 3:43 PM
Fun concept, but I eventually gave up reading through all the spelling errors.
12/3/19, 1:45 PM
Very, very hot. I loved the dialogue between the two men, where you can see their minds changing and their rivalry turning into attraction.
Anonymous
12/3/19, 1:24 PM
Wow! Another terrific story!
LongtimeFan
12/3/19, 12:31 PM
Another awesome chapter! I love hipsters, so this was extra fun (I want a Brady for Christmas). :p Nice going. Also, I loved the double entendre on "people really got into *fucking* Christmas sales," ha ha...
SirD
12/3/19, 11:30 AM
amazing story!!!!! hope you keep it going with the changing room or maybe the shoe department.
Evan
12/3/19, 7:49 AM
i really loved this story. great slow burn and seduction. use of musk and hypnosis elements. Just hot. Great work.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/3/19, 7:36 AM
I agree, take you time to recover