Recent Comments

12/3/19, 1:45 PM
Very, very hot. I loved the dialogue between the two men, where you can see their minds changing and their rivalry turning into attraction.
Anonymous
12/3/19, 1:24 PM
Wow! Another terrific story!
LongtimeFan
12/3/19, 12:31 PM
Another awesome chapter! I love hipsters, so this was extra fun (I want a Brady for Christmas). :p Nice going. Also, I loved the double entendre on "people really got into *fucking* Christmas sales," ha ha...
SirD
12/3/19, 11:30 AM
amazing story!!!!! hope you keep it going with the changing room or maybe the shoe department.
Evan
12/3/19, 7:49 AM
i really loved this story. great slow burn and seduction. use of musk and hypnosis elements. Just hot. Great work.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/3/19, 7:36 AM
I agree, take you time to recover
Anonymous
12/3/19, 6:05 AM
please continue this story! love it!
Anonymous
12/3/19, 5:57 AM
my favorite premise on here in a while, a lot of potential for the mall. keep going!
Drake Nightstorm
12/3/19, 5:38 AM
DMears You are sweet. I really apperciate your understanding. By the way. I sort of take ideas at times, not all of them mind you. If you or anyone reading these wants to shoot out a story idea and I like it. I may use it on the next installment, no promises just a thought.
12/3/19, 5:34 AM
Damn! I understand that problem. Definitely take the time to heal and write when you're ready! Best of luck and looking forward to the stuff you put out!