Recent Comments

Ruanraykung@me.com
12/2/19, 5:32 PM
insanely Hot. I love this story. can't waot for next!!!
Anonymous
12/2/19, 4:58 PM
best damn thing I've read in months. thank you!
Anonymous
12/2/19, 3:31 PM
now I want to see the eletronics department
Anonymous
12/2/19, 3:23 PM
terrific! Add more please!
12/2/19, 3:05 PM
now that the protagonist is a member of the wolves, I have no idea what the direction of the series is. Although, the original Pa seems a bit like a baddie (for having killed one of his sons and the hate he has with the protagonist seems to suggest that). Not to mention the original Pa seems a bit abusive of his position and control over his pups. I wonder if the goal here is to have a confrontation between the original Pa and our protagonist (whose name is Wolf Warrior I believe, which might be foreshadowing of an eventual fight/rebellion to come), but I'm rooting for our protagonist! can't wait to see where this will lead!
12/2/19, 2:57 PM
woah. Somehow I had a feeling this was about to happen, but I still feel sad for how it turned out for our protagonist. Great story. It seems to have more chapters, but the story could have ended this way too.
12/2/19, 2:51 PM
as a writer myself, it's always painful to "kill" a character, even if it's to serve the plot. The fact the story-telling shows grief and sadness for it just makes it more powerful. I love this story.
12/2/19, 2:32 PM
hot story! I loved the implied growth process and steps and how oblivious to it the protagonist was!
firesix
12/2/19, 12:30 PM
Insanely hot - as always. I missed you when you were on hiatus... am so glad you're back. The heat of the skin, scent stuff... good shit. Can't wait for more. Mwah.
LongtimeFan
12/2/19, 12:24 PM
Ha ha, what a fun idea! I like it. And I also always like when stories take the time to explain what happens to the women in the changing world (just long enough to move them along, though--I don't want to read about them. This is a GAY site after all). :p Great job!