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Anonymous
12/2/19, 3:31 PM
now I want to see the eletronics department
Anonymous
12/2/19, 3:23 PM
terrific! Add more please!
12/2/19, 3:05 PM
now that the protagonist is a member of the wolves, I have no idea what the direction of the series is. Although, the original Pa seems a bit like a baddie (for having killed one of his sons and the hate he has with the protagonist seems to suggest that). Not to mention the original Pa seems a bit abusive of his position and control over his pups. I wonder if the goal here is to have a confrontation between the original Pa and our protagonist (whose name is Wolf Warrior I believe, which might be foreshadowing of an eventual fight/rebellion to come), but I'm rooting for our protagonist! can't wait to see where this will lead!
12/2/19, 2:57 PM
woah. Somehow I had a feeling this was about to happen, but I still feel sad for how it turned out for our protagonist. Great story. It seems to have more chapters, but the story could have ended this way too.
12/2/19, 2:51 PM
as a writer myself, it's always painful to "kill" a character, even if it's to serve the plot. The fact the story-telling shows grief and sadness for it just makes it more powerful. I love this story.
12/2/19, 2:32 PM
hot story! I loved the implied growth process and steps and how oblivious to it the protagonist was!
firesix
12/2/19, 12:30 PM
Insanely hot - as always. I missed you when you were on hiatus... am so glad you're back. The heat of the skin, scent stuff... good shit. Can't wait for more. Mwah.
LongtimeFan
12/2/19, 12:24 PM
Ha ha, what a fun idea! I like it. And I also always like when stories take the time to explain what happens to the women in the changing world (just long enough to move them along, though--I don't want to read about them. This is a GAY site after all). :p Great job!
Anonymous
12/2/19, 9:33 AM
@Hypnothrill that's probably a bit fair, at least some of that was just because some parts of this have bothered me for a while and it was just letting it all out. But I would also say that the relatively solid world building just makes me more aware of how rushed the sex scenes are and how kinda bland the characters are (or at least this one where I feel like most of the character could be boiled down to "i'm a jock who has SEX".) If he put the energy he puts into the world building into the sex scenes and mind control then i would at least be more interested in looking at his work when he releases them but as of now i just gotta be honest and say currently it just feels like clutter. I mean the fact that he has 73 pages worth of stories adds to this too cause it just adds to that "quantity over quality" vibe i get from him. (also ngl there was like a week where i just wondered if this was like some advertising thing with the amount of links and pics in his stories but that specific vibe faded over time)
Anonymous
12/2/19, 8:10 AM
Def need to make this a series!!!