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Your Willing Follower
12/1/19, 8:16 AM
You've captured me as a strong follower. I don't know if your thirst for writing has been quenched. I can't help but feel excited about a time that you write again regardless of what it's about. Looking forward to it when it comes.
12/1/19, 6:51 AM
The comment above seems a little too harsh, and it doesn't give Willie enough credit for the things he does well, like detailed world building. But I agree that he often has a pacing problem, which can be seen in this story. We spend a lot of time on the set-up, and then the actual mind control and sex parts seem incredibly rushed. And yes, the pictures rarely seem to match the depiction of the characters in the story.
Anonymous
12/1/19, 5:32 AM
I feel like you would benefit from taking more time on these stories. You have so many of them and they all just feel so generic and predictable. Like i guessed 90% of this story by the first few paragraphs. The characters all feel interchangable, the sex scenes always feel like they were written by a high schooler, and the pictures linked in the stories always feel like someone just googled "totally hot naked guy" and picked the first result. Like the premise of these stories is usually interesting but then the writing just kills any momentum.
Anonymous
12/1/19, 4:10 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!!
Anonymous
12/1/19, 4:09 AM
I don't know about that. I liked the story. Hot!!!
12/1/19, 4:03 AM
Damn good......what a chapter ending! I love when a man in his right mind sees the slave fate before him.
Anonymous
12/1/19, 2:41 AM
Please make more
Anonymous
11/30/19, 11:17 PM
This is like 80% exposition
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/30/19, 9:57 PM
I did not finished lad comment so i will finish it now (it's raining and the internet signal is failing): to me the idea of Captain Zeal and Omen become a gay couple, with Omen became a power bottom and Zeal as a submissive top seem fitting and a bit of ironic
abrobdl@gmail.com
11/30/19, 9:55 PM
I do run spell check as to Grammar, I use Grammarly and the grammar books I do have.