Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/1/19, 5:32 AM
I feel like you would benefit from taking more time on these stories. You have so many of them and they all just feel so generic and predictable. Like i guessed 90% of this story by the first few paragraphs. The characters all feel interchangable, the sex scenes always feel like they were written by a high schooler, and the pictures linked in the stories always feel like someone just googled "totally hot naked guy" and picked the first result. Like the premise of these stories is usually interesting but then the writing just kills any momentum.
Anonymous
12/1/19, 4:10 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!!
Anonymous
12/1/19, 4:09 AM
I don't know about that. I liked the story. Hot!!!
12/1/19, 4:03 AM
Damn good......what a chapter ending! I love when a man in his right mind sees the slave fate before him.
Anonymous
12/1/19, 2:41 AM
Please make more
Anonymous
11/30/19, 11:17 PM
This is like 80% exposition
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/30/19, 9:57 PM
I did not finished lad comment so i will finish it now (it's raining and the internet signal is failing): to me the idea of Captain Zeal and Omen become a gay couple, with Omen became a power bottom and Zeal as a submissive top seem fitting and a bit of ironic
abrobdl@gmail.com
11/30/19, 9:55 PM
I do run spell check as to Grammar, I use Grammarly and the grammar books I do have.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/30/19, 9:41 PM
to me the idea of Captain Zeal and Omen become a gay couple, with Omen became a power bottom and Zeal as a submissive top
Drake Nightstorm
11/30/19, 9:19 PM
Don't worry. Part two will be coming. I wanted to take this one a bit slower.