Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/25/19, 1:14 AM
excellent work. I loved the story, and the rubber, mind control and ownership are all great subjects. I hope you keep on writing. I'd be interested to see what other stories you can come up with now that this one is finished.
11/24/19, 11:40 PM
Please continue!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/24/19, 10:23 PM
I like this, continue please
Longtime Fan
11/24/19, 10:20 PM
Say, this is great stuff! It reminds me a little of "Musclove, Texas," one of the first stories I ever read on this site. I love muscle growth and dumbing down, so this story hits the spot. Great going! :)
11/24/19, 9:35 PM
I'm so excited to know what the boss has in store for the fraternity and what his ultimate plan is. Just a bit of a critique, I wish we could've seen more of Brent's sadistic mind get played out on Tanner more. But I enjoyed the mind control aspect, how thoroughly planned the take down was and liked the mind control sprays that PB was using. It's always a pleasant surprise to see your story updates on this site! Please keep writing, and keep em coming. cI'm a huge fan!
ForgottenCradle
11/24/19, 8:50 PM
I will be so sad when it ends,really. I fell in love with this series
Nephilim
11/24/19, 8:26 PM
I loved this story from first to last chapter. Nice writing, good ideas, very kinky concepts. Thank you.
Nov 24, 2019
11/24/19, 6:56 PM
If you like possession, I do have an idea. Nerd walks into an alley and gets possessed by the spirit of a dead Jock. Nerd notices that he was having dreams of things he knew he would have never done, for example akin to working out, sports and being a dumb jock. Each day is a progressive transformation and he connects the dots that the dreams are changing his body and mind. He was losing interest in nerdy stuff and had almost joined the jocks. To fight it, he learns Lucid Dreaming and ends up uniting both aspects into one.
El_Cazador
11/24/19, 6:01 PM
Me gustó mucho la historia, tal es charle no este interesado en tom de manera amorosa pero hacerlo pasar situaciones vergonzosas podría ser muy interesante
Nov 24, 2019
Anonymous
11/24/19, 3:13 PM
Incredible. This is why I cum here. Thank you.